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Blood by ~lilmorbidprincess:iconlilmorbidprincess:

Categories Literature > Poetry > General Poetry > Open




It runs through my veins
Like liquid fire
Causing so much pain,
Yet bringing such joy
Flowing through my muscular heart
And stright into my thoughtful brain
Giving me life
It is the blood of time
Carrying me out of the past
And propelling me into the unending future.
©2003-2009 ~lilmorbidprincess
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Author's Comments

This was a popcorn poem we did in english. We were supposed to do it on popcorn, but since I wasn't there that day I got to pick my own topic. I cut myslef on the page before I got started and so I did mine on blood. My teacher was a little upset and had a talk with me. But she said it was very good, just disterbing. lol.

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~Spazishness Nov 28, 2003, 1:27:43 PM
Beautiful picture! I love the white hair.
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~lilmorbidprincess Nov 28, 2003, 5:03:58 PM
Thanx. Hope you liked the poem too.
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~Zurkhardo Feb 10, 2008, 5:57:37 PM
Love the poem. Very out-of-the-box medium you used there =P

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~XXXSceneChickXX May 2, 2008, 7:40:58 PM
wow
i love
i like the pic to
but i love the poem more!!!!!

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Mood: Joy ~Butterfli-Joker Sep 24, 2008, 5:15:58 PM
Very nice poem.
LOVE what your inspiration was.
Well, could have been worse. You could have told your teacher that how the idea came about, "got the idea in your class". :lmao:

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Mood: Amazed ~xXxemocookiexXx Oct 6, 2008, 7:15:25 PM
kinda creepy but ill be compleatly honest with you its kick ass nono bad ass! i love it! <3
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~PhantomThiefVier Dec 18, 2008, 7:27:26 AM
Wicked poem and pic. Gotta love the thorns.
And teachers are always concerned when someone writes something macabre. For one, many don't understand the genre well and for two they have to think about the mental faculties of their students. Can't be too crazy. XD

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~worick1992 Mar 24, 2009, 8:26:32 PM
there is so much soul in it! perhaps from the painful insparation? perhaps the undeniable truth liying within? perhaps the powerful visual? wherever the poem got its power it is obvios that you have an amazing talent. I beg that you continue no mater what anyone says!
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~lilmorbidprincess Mar 24, 2009, 8:32:37 PM
I will. And thank you My poetry is my heart and soul, so it makes me happy to know that others love it as much as I do.

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"You can only express your ownership of a thing in terms of how freely you can give it up."~Stephen King
"No artist is ever morbid."~Oscar Wilde
"Anything is better than to be alone."~Evenesence
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